Thursday, January 22, 2009

Straight from the dragons mouth

Hunger Pains

mind sweeper
time has no keeper
you can claim him, but you can't keep her
he tells you his truth, she explains
only staying for lust, yet you cant complain
an affair kindled by passion
he's too passive, she keeps passing
in one ear, and out of the other
acting like a storybook couple, but that's just a cover
tears running, mouths running, shes running
yet in the midst of all this chaos, he finds her stunning
realization sets in when he sees he may really need her
now she's leaving because she's hungry for love
but he wants to be the one who finally feeds her
its too late, she's learned to feed herself.


-rmk

This really hit me when i read it.

3 comments:

Ms Amanda Mercedes said...

very interesting...

Janiece said...

mad nice

rachellerevived said...

im glad you like my poem ! im gonna send you more soon... so i can get your opinion on them.